But... but... how could you do that to me? What have you done? HOW? HOW???
*flails*
God. This is one of the most striking, best written stories I have read ever. It's so skilfully written - you've built the world so well, and the characters are all perfect. I love Ariadne being the central character. I adore Arthur and Eames's relationship. I really, really like how you have written Arthur in all his guises. Your writing of fantasia is masterful and fits so well into the dream world, and the way the plot twists and turns... Jesus. I would give my arm to be a quarter as skilled as you are. When it comes out about Amelia's mum, I burst into tears. And then... the end. You build it up so it can be happy, and you leave it with Mal being that ultimate parasite, and, oh, I was rooting for Arthur and Eames all the way through... I never realised I would lose Ari, or that I would care.
This is wonderful, and this comment does not do the story justice. I will try again later in the hope I can come up with something better. In the meantime I am going to force my husband to read this so I can cry at him properly.
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*flails*
God. This is one of the most striking, best written stories I have read ever. It's so skilfully written - you've built the world so well, and the characters are all perfect. I love Ariadne being the central character. I adore Arthur and Eames's relationship. I really, really like how you have written Arthur in all his guises. Your writing of fantasia is masterful and fits so well into the dream world, and the way the plot twists and turns... Jesus. I would give my arm to be a quarter as skilled as you are. When it comes out about Amelia's mum, I burst into tears. And then... the end. You build it up so it can be happy, and you leave it with Mal being that ultimate parasite, and, oh, I was rooting for Arthur and Eames all the way through... I never realised I would lose Ari, or that I would care.
This is wonderful, and this comment does not do the story justice. I will try again later in the hope I can come up with something better. In the meantime I am going to force my husband to read this so I can cry at him properly.