Ooh, this is AMAZING!! I love the structure, the repetition and parallels which march on, tracing her development with details that ring perfectly true. I'm also overly attached to how Pete snuck into her childhood (they are totally best friends!) and how Myka is so obviously still growing and learning, even while so much of her has never changed at all.

And the last line makes this EPIC. :D:D:D

(Only now... I kinda want to see it fall, just to see what it would look like o.O )